An imbalance of plot points vs action
3 stars
First, the good: the setting is cute and the characters are fairly well done. There's enough background to the relationship between the main characters to keep things interesting, and they both grow into their relationship and their new town. That's fun to witness, as is the elemental magic of Kianthe.
Now, the bad: the narrator of the audiobook was not my favorite. If the mage's name is pronounced "Kianth," then why is it spelled "Kianthe"? (Maybe a critique for the author, either way.) The narrator makes the choice to act out laughter every time it's mentioned and it's not good. Multiple urgent plot points are introduced; most are tabled for later books in the series. One is resolved very improbably, with a plan that is kept secret from readers until it's put into action - unnecessary because it was not even really a plan, nothing complicated. The suspense did …
First, the good: the setting is cute and the characters are fairly well done. There's enough background to the relationship between the main characters to keep things interesting, and they both grow into their relationship and their new town. That's fun to witness, as is the elemental magic of Kianthe.
Now, the bad: the narrator of the audiobook was not my favorite. If the mage's name is pronounced "Kianth," then why is it spelled "Kianthe"? (Maybe a critique for the author, either way.) The narrator makes the choice to act out laughter every time it's mentioned and it's not good. Multiple urgent plot points are introduced; most are tabled for later books in the series. One is resolved very improbably, with a plan that is kept secret from readers until it's put into action - unnecessary because it was not even really a plan, nothing complicated. The suspense did not match the reveal, just as the suspense created by the introduction of things like a major unresolved threat to the town where our heroines have settled does not match the temporary resolution of "we'll get to that next book."
Just not my cup of tea I suppose, but certainly plenty of cozy fun for someone who doesn't mind that.