Silver under Nightfall

So what happens when a vampire hunter ends up in a poly thruple with two vampire nobles?

Remy is a vampire hunter partly estranged from his father and an outcast in the other hunters, given only the bounties no one else would touch despite him proving himself a thousand times over. This may have something to do with his mother eloping with a vampire. His only friend is secretly a vampire he saved and he is often used for sexual favours from one older noble lady.

A new mutating disease is creating new monsters and the town immediately turns on him, blaming him for the death of a Lord. His only allies ends up being cinnamon bun vampire Xiaodan and her arrogant fiancé Zidan. Taking him under their wing, they work together to solve the mystery despite raised pitchforks from the humans. In time, Remy gets closer to them and has to reassess what he thinks he knows about vampires and his family’s history with them.

Remy is an interesting character. I was getting a bit frustrated at him at times for his determination to misread Xiaodan and Zidan’s advances; but given the bucket load of trauma dumped on his lap I’m surprised he manages to get out of bed in the morning so I do feel for him a great deal. Xiaodan managed to be just on the fun side of things without becoming Remy’s manic pixie dream girl but both she and Zidan deserve an award for their patience as Remy slowly unpacks his shit.

The plot as a whole is interesting but does take a back seat to the characters a lot which I think works for this; I don’t think I’d understand Remy as well if the character time was sacrificed for some extra subplots or whatever. But I could do with more time with some of the side characters. The world is similarly a little thin, but still engaging for what is there. 

I have a sneaking suspicion that I'm a vampire girly at heart. Having never read Twilight or anything by Anne Rice, I'm not sure, but I was eager to jump into this to get a taste for that sweet, sweet vampire life. Unfortunately, this wasn't it. It was 200 pages too long, had too many tropes, and couldn't settle on a consistent tone, all while having a choppy, unsatisfying story.

In Silver Under Nightfall, we are following Remy, a vampire hunter in the kingdom of Aluria, son of a renowned vampire hunting duke who kind of hates him. After Aluria strikes an alliance with one vampire court, Remy is roped into allying with two engaged vampire lords, Malekh and Xiaodan to find the source of a mysterious, undead plague that is affecting both vampires and humans alike. Through this, he grows closer to both Xiaodan and Malekh and eventually becomes their familiar (butt boy). That honestly sums up this entire book, but it is 500 pages long.

Okay where do we start. Characters were bad. Everyone was completely one dimensional with very little growth. Remy was bombastic, hot headed and dumb, always getting into trouble. His dad was an asshole. Xiaodan was warm, loving, kind, and quick to trust. Malekh was a stubborn, hard headed know-it-all. And none of these characters changed at all throughout the entire book. There was nothing dynamic about them, and this is one of the reasons the romances felt undeserved. No one grew into a character that was lovable, so it felt weird that they all started to like each other as time went on when none of them were changing. The romance between Xiaodan and Remy was rushed and boring, and the romance between Malekh and Remy was waaaay too slow and never developed into anything that was compelling aside from the fact that they all had a lot of sex with each other without a lot of emotional connection. And I'd argue the attempt at justifying this polycule was like half the book, so in between weirdly paced action sequences, it was a lot of arguing and bitterness, that then turned into a lot of arguing, sex, and bitterness.

Yeah, so the pacing. This story was a bit of a mess to begin with. I feel like it was poorly developed, so there wasn't really a clean way to map it out into a cohesive narrative. The intersection of vampire politics, human politics, attempted world building, and the sloppy inclusion of numerous personal storylines made this tedious to follow. Too much going on, too much jumping around, and not enough attention devoted to any one thing. There were moments where twists were revealed that were so unsatisfying because I had no investment into that subplot because it was sloppily attended to. Action sequences and character deaths had no weight because I wasn't fully clear on why this battle was happening or why I was supposed to care about this character that we barely got to know. It just felt like everything had such low stakes despite the narrative constantly trying to convince you that everything that was happening was So Important. While I found the actual action sequences to be interesting to read, ironically enough, this is where the tone shifting was at its most egregious. Constantly throughout, the book is taking itself extremely seriously, but every time someone scored some kill, we would get the most cringe inducing Marvel one-liner that entirely took me out of the action.

It wasn't all terrible though. I did find the world building to be interesting, and I certainly didn't hate this by any measure. There is an actual story here that I think could have been executed on better, but I was just really hoping it would be more interesting. I'd even consider picking up the next one if reviews are good.

I'm really hoping to read some better vampire books this year, this was not a good kick off to 2024. I suspect if you enjoy very trope-y, digestible fiction that reads like fanfic, you'll like this. That's not to shit on fanfic though, I have read a lot of fanfic much better written than this.