Could have been good. Needs an editor.
The first book was amazing and clean. Unfortunately and as much as I hate doing this, this sequel have too many spelling mistakes, typos, incorrect names, and mixed up here and there, it was very distracting and killed the enjoyment and immersion.
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3 stars
Review of 'A Hole in Time' on 'GoodReads'
3 stars
Could have been good. Needs an editor.
The first book was amazing and clean. Unfortunately and as much as I hate doing this, this sequel have too many spelling mistakes, typos, incorrect names, and mixed up here and there, it was very distracting and killed the enjoyment and immersion.
Yohan Yukiya Sese Cuneta μ¬μν π rated The Aeneid of Virgil: 5 stars

The Aeneid of Virgil by Publius Vergilius Maro
"A prose translation of Vergil's Aeneid with new illustrations and informational appendices"--Provided by publisher.
Yohan Yukiya Sese Cuneta μ¬μν π rated Awakening, The: 4 stars
Yohan Yukiya Sese Cuneta μ¬μν π rated The Paths Between Worlds: 5 stars
Yohan Yukiya Sese Cuneta μ¬μν π rated Return from the Portal: 4 stars
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5 stars
Adventurous
Short but an adventure into the world of Jie's sisterhood. It was a great insight into her character and what shaped her to become the best in their Clan. Through this short novel, we had a peak what makes Jie tick and why Jie is Jie.
Review of 'Thorn of the Night Blossoms' on 'GoodReads'
5 stars
Adventurous
Short but an adventure into the world of Jie's sisterhood. It was a great insight into her character and what shaped her to become the best in their Clan. Through this short novel, we had a peak what makes Jie tick and why Jie is Jie.
Yohan Yukiya Sese Cuneta μ¬μν π rated Atlantis Gate: 5 stars
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The circle is half complete
And the circle is half complete. This is the most exciting I've read in the "Ones Before" universe. I started on Nightstalkers and finished Time Patrol before I started on this series. I've debated long how I'll do the "Ones Before" universe and I can truly say I made the right decision to read the three series in this particular order β it made this series, in particular this book, very heart pumping. The variables and probabilities were amazingly woven together without conflicting any established "canon".
Yes, I'm calling the Nighstalkers, Time Patrol, and Atlantis as the "Ones Before universe" together.